Sunday, 22 April 2018

week 2



1 comment:

  1. Right now, my eye doesn't know where to travel: The bubble thing, the temple, or the character. Which is the most important? The bubble? If so, add some bright lighting on the environment behind it so that it jumps out alot more. The colors on your character are pretty discordant right now too, and the entire environment really feels super ambient lit, so I might add in more shadowed areas in the fg, and pools of light that cascade from the left onto the pathway that leads to your temple.

    Some of the snow stuff is a bit intense and muddy, i might just remove it entirely for now, and then add it back in at the end with photo-ref once you're almost done.

    Also, the perspective on your temple vs. the walkway leading to the bubble doesn't match. Your horizon is very low for the temple, and very high for the bridge thing. Sync them up together to ground everything into the same image.

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