-watch your saturation, it's a little bit too intense at the moment. -need something interesting in the fg -could use more fog and mist (like the reference) -bridge feels a bit thin - like it'll break if somebody drives over it, maybe thicken it up a bit. -add something interesting in the valley but be careful about imbalancing your composition. -could use some more intense light on the refinery. -watch your darks on the refinery as they're almost darker than the fg and feel a bit out of place compared to the values of the mountains around it.
-watch your saturation, it's a little bit too intense at the moment.
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-could use more fog and mist (like the reference)
-bridge feels a bit thin - like it'll break if somebody drives over it, maybe thicken it up a bit.
-add something interesting in the valley but be careful about imbalancing your composition.
-could use some more intense light on the refinery.
-watch your darks on the refinery as they're almost darker than the fg and feel a bit out of place compared to the values of the mountains around it.
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